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Notice that the descriptions of the elements in this scene are in a logical order. First, the stars are described, then the ocean and ocean breezes. The final details are about the person she was with. Clustering sentences in this way makes it easier for readers to reconstruct the scene in their minds. You can, as in this example move from the distant to the close-up, or work in reverse, depending upon the effect you want to create. If you are describing a place that you are moving through, you can also choose to describe things in chronological order, describing things as you would see them within the scene.
